Tuesday, April 5, 2011

DARKNESS

The darkness comes into my life and takes me. Every fibre of my being is chilled and I can feel nothing but emptiness.

Loved ones appear distant and unapproachable. All wish to help, but instead aids the darkness in its powers.

The darkness easily consumes me. I can no longer see light anymore. My mind has darkened to thoughts of anger and despair. My heart blackened like tar.

The darkness takes me and I know that this time I will not return. Every breath I take feels like torture. The darkness takes me and I can fight no more.

14 comments :

  1. Hey Murees,
    I recognise the feeling, nicely evoked.
    regards
    mood
    Moody Writing

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  2. There is not one creative soul that has not felt that way at least once. Nicely written and totally felt.

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  3. Looking out my window at the rainy morning, the fog rolling across the field, and that damn blinking cursor reminding me I have not met my word goal today...
    Yes, I feel this sentiment exactly!
    Nice piece. :)

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  4. I like your D post, it's nicely worded.
    Happy D Day!

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  5. I know the feeling!
    Beautiful post!

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  6. Mooderino - Thank you.

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  7. Good take on darkness. I wonder how you felt after the darkness had its way.

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  8. Ellie - Thank you. Also, thank you for stopping by and following my blog.

    Angela - In truth? I see a bit of the light.

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  9. This was beautifully written - well done!

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  10. Very nicely done!

    New follower from A-Z - nice to meet you!

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